This is the best interactive fiction game I've ever played. Your writing skills are amazing, and I love how each character is written. Throughout playing it, it just keeps getting better and better. I like coming back to replay this game when I'm bored. I'm looking forward to playing the rest of the chapters when they are released!
Good evening. I'm a student of University of Amsterdam and currently I'm researching the ways to improve authoring experience of Interactive Digital Narrative creators. One of the things I've noticed is that authoring tools in general don't have the functionality to support planning beforehand. It seems you've got an extensive experience in non-linear writing (using Twine). I would like to interview you (or send you a survey/questionnaire) to understand your personal approach to creating stories and potentially see whether implementing a tool that supports planning can help you in your creative endeavours. Do you think you'll have time to talk to me about this? Thanks a lot for response. Kind regards, Julia
I wonder why the responses ' "Are you done with the quirky remarks yet?" ' and 'Stare' in Rylan's fight both lead to the same scenario? Every other choices work just fine for me.
helloo! i just wanted to say i LOVEW THIS GAME its so good and its very impressive how consistent the updates are with the length and quality of the writing!! i noticed some typos in chapter 3, like words being missing! one in particular is ""'s a miracle worker." It's the closest I've heard Kai come to gushing.". it isnt anythign game ruining, but i just wanted to point it out!! good luck on working on the game in the future updates! this is probably my favorite text-based game so far
I got so scared when I finished season ten. I thought it was going to be like other stories i've read where they are unfinished and untouched for years. That was until I saw they commented 7 days ago :)))
hehe yes, i'm still alive. chapter 11 is in the works but my life is very very busy right now so progress has been slow. it hasn't been abandoned though !
holy moly i Did Not Sleep and played this in one go. All the interactions were so fun; I went for Rylan and Arion. 10/10 content, i laughed a lot at so many scenes. Very excited for future updates!!
i'll copy and paste my answer from a comment below: "it's not concrete yet but about 16-17. originally it was going to be 20ish but overtime the chapters have collapsed together"
1) how many chapters are you planning to make? (sorry if it's already on the page, i can't find it)
2) there's a kid in my bio class named rylan and he's annoying as all heck..i'm doing the rylan route rn and my brain is really confused lmao. ... they even sort of act similar
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I really loved this. I do hope you plan to write more!
This is the best interactive fiction game I've ever played. Your writing skills are amazing, and I love how each character is written. Throughout playing it, it just keeps getting better and better. I like coming back to replay this game when I'm bored. I'm looking forward to playing the rest of the chapters when they are released!
me after replaying this for the 186272527125 time:
So relatable
Good evening. I'm a student of University of Amsterdam and currently I'm researching the ways to improve authoring experience of Interactive Digital Narrative creators. One of the things I've noticed is that authoring tools in general don't have the functionality to support planning beforehand. It seems you've got an extensive experience in non-linear writing (using Twine). I would like to interview you (or send you a survey/questionnaire) to understand your personal approach to creating stories and potentially see whether implementing a tool that supports planning can help you in your creative endeavours. Do you think you'll have time to talk to me about this? Thanks a lot for response. Kind regards, Julia
Hi! If you're still interested and want to email me, you can contact me at evertidings@gmail.com
this game makes me stim at an unbelievable rate (i love this so much can I please marry all of the characters)
also its amazing and youre super duper awesome for your amazing story writing skills :333
eek thank you! glad to hear you're enjoying it <3
I wonder why the responses ' "Are you done with the quirky remarks yet?" ' and 'Stare' in Rylan's fight both lead to the same scenario? Every other choices work just fine for me.
oops! that's definitely a bug, ty for the catch <3
helloo! i just wanted to say i LOVEW THIS GAME its so good and its very impressive how consistent the updates are with the length and quality of the writing!! i noticed some typos in chapter 3, like words being missing! one in particular is ""'s a miracle worker." It's the closest I've heard Kai come to gushing.". it isnt anythign game ruining, but i just wanted to point it out!! good luck on working on the game in the future updates! this is probably my favorite text-based game so far
thank you for the catches! as many times as i've read this through, i always seem to find more. glad to hear you're enjoying it though <333
I got so scared when I finished season ten. I thought it was going to be like other stories i've read where they are unfinished and untouched for years. That was until I saw they commented 7 days ago :)))
hehe yes, i'm still alive. chapter 11 is in the works but my life is very very busy right now so progress has been slow. it hasn't been abandoned though !
alright, thank you. Good luck with personal stuff!
screaming love the UI love the story love how genuinely lovable all the characters are
ahhh thanks! the ui is one of my proudest achievements <33
holy moly i Did Not Sleep and played this in one go. All the interactions were so fun; I went for Rylan and Arion. 10/10 content, i laughed a lot at so many scenes. Very excited for future updates!!
eeeek thank you !!
Great so far!!!! arden is my fav i took that knife with no regrets! about how many chapters are there going to be?
i'll copy and paste my answer from a comment below: "it's not concrete yet but about 16-17. originally it was going to be 20ish but overtime the chapters have collapsed together"
I just wanted to wish you a good night (or day, depending on when you read this comment)! :3
you too ! thank you <3
1) how many chapters are you planning to make? (sorry if it's already on the page, i can't find it)
2) there's a kid in my bio class named rylan and he's annoying as all heck..i'm doing the rylan route rn and my brain is really confused lmao. ... they even sort of act similar
it's not concrete yet but about 16-17. originally it was going to be 20ish but overtime the chapters have collapsed together
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thank you for your patience <33
happyhappy new year's dear author<3
happy new year ! it's small but this comment means a lot, thank you <3
ofcourse!! u made my year sm better, hope this year's the best one yet for u<3
this IF is even better when you imagine it in black and white