I'm so sorry that my first comment here is a bug (because I played this before and loved it, but never said anything), but here's a bug on the sarcastic option right at the start.
Also, "It's a mandatory meeting after all" in 3.20 got repeated. Also I think there should be a space after the sentence in which you run a hand through your hair in the same chapter? Ugh, so sorry that all I have are bugs and not enough compliments. I'm too involved right now to think of good compliments.
...I'm so sorry for all my comments. Like, this all just looks so negative. Eugh. I love this story so much, and I'm not even saying anything! Rylan my beloved...
"And what if that little charade was all part of my grand scheme to get you to trust me? Will you still be glad to have gone out with me tonight when I have my fangs at your throat, sucking your life away?" Her tone is so ridiculous that it couldn't be anything but sarcasm.
WHY IS THIS MORE HORNY THAN THE FLIRTING DIALOGUE.
hi! thanks so much for all the corrections. if you continue to find more could you please email me instead of adding to the thread? i just find it easier that way <3
about the game itself though: i played the original dashingdon version and thoroughly enjoyed it so i was glad to stumble upon it here as well (i may or may not just be fully inlove with A)
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I played this on dashingdon and and thought it was phenomenal - incredibly pleased to see you here on itch :)
i’m happy to be here! thank you so much for the compliment <33
Also, "It's a mandatory meeting after all" in 3.20 got repeated. Also I think there should be a space after the sentence in which you run a hand through your hair in the same chapter? Ugh, so sorry that all I have are bugs and not enough compliments. I'm too involved right now to think of good compliments.
Another bug report; I chose to read Blane's report, and afterwards I could choose to read it again. The game disappeared Arden's report instead.
5.09, "You know, if it wasn't forRapture and my generousity,"
I have realized that my character is basically Blane except less competitive. Which makes a surprisingly mellow character.
5.31r, Thai isn't capitalized.
...I'm so sorry for all my comments. Like, this all just looks so negative. Eugh. I love this story so much, and I'm not even saying anything! Rylan my beloved...
I think every option in 5.42 acts as though you've chosen the first option?
Hunter stats says "You have obsidian black chest length hair, which is na." Dunno what that means.
"Sway side to side" as a dance option has a > at the end.
Alright, read back up to where I was, and it's just as absolutely delicious as I remember. Ugh. So good. You're a fantastic writer.
"And what if that little charade was all part of my grand scheme to get you to trust me? Will you still be glad to have gone out with me tonight when I have my fangs at your throat, sucking your life away?" Her tone is so ridiculous that it couldn't be anything but sarcasm.
WHY IS THIS MORE HORNY THAN THE FLIRTING DIALOGUE.
Also, there's a </span> </div> after Sebastian's relationship info.
hi! thanks so much for all the corrections. if you continue to find more could you please email me instead of adding to the thread? i just find it easier that way <3
FUCK. I'M SORRY. FROM NOW ON I WILL. MY MOST SINCERE APOLOGIES.
Would you like these compiled into an email or is this fine?
haha don’t be sorry. you can do whatever is best for you <3
you might want to add a way to reset the game it would be nice to play through it again and make different choices, see how things would be different
oo if i can find a way to do that i certainly will <3
That would be appreciated.
about the game itself though: i played the original dashingdon version and thoroughly enjoyed it so i was glad to stumble upon it here as well (i may or may not just be fully inlove with A)
lets goooooo
Hello, I found this error in chapter 5.
thank you so much for the catch! i've fixed it and will upload it soon <3
Woo! We are living buddy! The new demo is live and that is fantastic! ☆*: .｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆
so glad you're enjoying it!!