When Twilight Strikes

Oh fuck that reveal at the end was so worth the wait

Just finished! Oh my gosh, my MC NEEDS K!!! He is literally perfect for her.  Like, she will not take care of herself, and he is being soooo perfectly insistent that she does already, and I know things are barely starting with them! I loved how I could feel his internal war, yet also not being able to not care. And I loved everything else about the chapter as well. The Fae Realm was so fun to imagine and experience. Thank you for the update <3 (Literally made my night, was having some bad days and this really cheered me up)

i started reading this IF months ago but genuinely, nothing had made me feel the way i'm feeling right now. chapter 12 was, holy moly. it feels like there's a pit in my stomach; as if i was living through everything that occurred in this latest chapter. i truly love this IF so much (ó﹏ò｡) and god, rylan... i am genuinely going insane over the complexity of the relationship between the MC (or well us kinda since the IF is first-person pov..) and them. the freaking silent exchanges this chapter i'm screaming ( ꩜ ᯅ ꩜;) i absolutely love the pace of the progression with rylan but i NEED something more NEOWWWW (⊙෴◎) sigh, i don't think i'm gonna be able to wait for the next chapter without going insane (◞‸◟；) author you are so amazing i love you and your writing so much pls don't explode 

I head cannon that my MC escaped from a cult and therefore has horrendous social skills.

I wonder if the text is changed a bit based on how much like, how good your relationship with a character is 🧐

(I think i may found a typo or I'm just dumb but

I shift uncomfortably. She's right, of course. At the end of the day, despite how important I am, I'm only a cog in a w

. I don't even have the most power in my department, let alone the New York Institute—or the organization itself.

The sentence: ...despite how important I am, I'm only a cog in a w . And I'm wondering if it's missing the last word, I'm not native English speaker so i don't really know but just thought I'd point it out (?) make a comment about it  point it out is probably better so yeah... This comment feels so awkward)

I can't believe i forgot it's coming out today (we will not talk about that i already made a comment 14 hours ago.)

Played the new chapter for the first time (yes I'll replay it i need all the romances) and oh ma goddess- i- I don't know what else to say then i need more and also can the author just marry me?  [I should know when to stop talking, anyways] Why this If so good and addicting (not that I'm complaining tho 😌)

RAHHH SO EXCITED TO SEE THE UPDATE

I can't believe that for the first time in history I'll be home when the update comes out

Reread the story to get a refresher for tomorrow and realized that fashionably professional might not be available so seeing I still have it from my earlier save makes it feel like I got a limited time clothing choice. :)

Such an amazing game. So excited for the future of it and so happy from what I have already read. You should be proud. :]

I am literally obsessed. Rylan makes me blush and giggle and kick my feet in the air.

Hello great game so far on my second run but now noticing something. There is a typo

can you add more gender neutral clothing options? i know they say that any gender can wear any color but i feel like the masculine clothes are very femboy like

After maybe almost a year i realized this is written in first pov (I.... My hair....), and honestly? i love it. I've read so many ifs which where written in second pov which I like but there's just something about it that I don't like 🤷‍♀️ (yes i suck at explaining), tho the ifs are still good i personally like first pov a lot more, why? Well idk

...and that's all just wanted to point it out and say my thoughts because i gotta tell it to someone 

Edit: huh... Funny how my views and way i play the game change from when i first played 

the amount of times ive played this game...... friend, i truly love your writing style and the life you breathe into your characters. i know you obviously have plans to update this IF but like. even if you never did again i beg of you not to stop writing because I can see the passion and the effort and i adore it.

am i replaying this game for who knows what time again? Yes. There's no other option. (Just to make sure I'm replaying because this game is so good like the story the characters everything)

I am SO invested about this i love the writing and everything omg! time to romance the others now while waiting for chapter 12 :

am i romancing blane? yes.

this is literally the exact type of game im looking for?? i havent gotten too far yet, but the writing and general style is so well done!

spent my whole day, evening and night binging this and im CLAWINGGGG at the bars of my enclosure begging to be let out !!!

ITS SOOOOOO SOOOO GOOD!!! the way you write characeters and their emotions and dynamics just hit so hard and its so exceptionally well done! all of them have grown on me SO much but nikolas & arden have my heart real bad #needthat

AND THE WORLDBUILIDNG!!!!!! its just so gripping and had me on the edge of my seat and i am so sos SO excited to see where the rest of the story goes and i'll diligently be looking out for updates eekkeekeke

OH AND THE MC!!!! I LOVEEEE how theyre characterized, it all just feels very real to me, especially those panic attack scenes!! they felt so surreal i was panicking along w them lmfaoo 😭

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!! the writing and worldbuilding and the premise and just everything about this is so so so amazing i literally have no words and its all so engaging im begging to be let out of my enclosure 

im addicted.

All my stuff got deleted . . .

(WHY MY AUTO SAVE NOT APPEAR, ITS THE ONLY SAVE I HAD)

NEVERMIND I HAD A SAVE OMG I ALMOST DIED

I've just started playing/reading, the beginning itself is very engaging, I   r e a l l y   like it. But how many chapters are there going to be? I'd like to play the full game, knowing that the story won't suddenly halt in the middle, you know?

In chapter 11, is there an option for A's route? I've been playing for the past couple of hours and can't unlock anything but Blane, Kian, and Rylan! Help would be MUCH appreciated!!

Love this game and the writing sooooo much tho :,[

I come back to this every now and then for a reread, and I don't usually comment on things but I just wanted you to know I absolutely love your writing! I also adore A and Rylan! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Is it possible to have poly routes? I'm obsessed with Rylan but I also kinda #need Blane too ngl...

I can't WAIT for the next chapter. The characters are so well written out, and so far, the plot is just MWAH MWAH MWAH. Looking forward to seeing more! <3

ilovethisilovethisilovethis

I fully just created an itch account so I could tell you how much I love this.

Plot? perfect. Political undertones? Mwah. The option to make it so my character DOESN'T have all their shit together? Exquisite. I love being able to be on the verge of a mental breakdown instead of being the glorified hero who's always fine.

Arden is incredible exactly the kind of best friend I need in real life. Blane and Kian are SO interesting and I'm looking forward to getting them to warm up to me more :) Rylan is the fuckin GOAT I love her sm

NOLANNNNNNNNN

(Yeah so I am freaking INFATUATED with Nolan. Good job.)

this is so incredible!! i love the writing omggmgg. this story has got me on the edge of my seat!1 keep up the great work i cant wait for chapter 12

I truly love this story; it has me completely hooked. All the characters are engaging, but I’m especially taken with A—I really wish he were real! Keep up the great work!!!

AGHHHH, IT'S SO GOOD, I LOVE IT!!

Hi! Firstly, thank you so much for this IF!

Secondly, I recommend everyone to romance N, I got a feeling that they one again outshined by others. While I'm in love with A, N's route is wonderful thing. Also he's got a dog. Also that wonderful human was able to tame Blane by kindness, patience and im sure by wit. 

And now about mc! Your writing is truly brilliant, I believed in mc's struggles, in mc's affection, in their opinions. You made them alive and flawed, just like other characters. It's not easy to do, so - you did wonderful. 

I can't say much of the plot but I'm enjoying the "we are fucked" part coz. Yeah. This is not a simple quest. 

I must say on Blane's and K's relationship - love what you did there. 

I'm enjoying all routes, but A's got me in chokehold - they are partners, they are best friends, they are pining. The best cliche. 

Also I'm sorry if you already explained this, but in the beginning mc definitely comparing similarities in boss' and A' appearances. Did I missed something on that? I failing to see any reason to this besides obvious.