Oh I thought that I didn't get something and I see 4 more people(that upvoted 😛) thought you got the secret to the password protection 😁 but its up yay!
W game. Usually I offer constructive criticism, usually about pacing. However there really aren't any issues with the game. None that stand out to me at least.
Hello! I really enjoy your game! I really happy that R is from SE descent (more specifically from the Philippines). We are rarely represented in media so it's nice to see more representation. I definitely fell in love with Blaine and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
i'm always happy to provide rep for minorities (in this case, filipinos). it warms my heart when i see myself represented and i love creating that feeling for others. tysm for playing <3333
I think this is the first twine I played in a while where I just absolutely love everybody, that I already created saves for each person. Can't wait for more!!!
AAAAAA i love interactive fiction so much and stuff like this always has me grooving in my seat. i love the banter between the characters and the different dynamics that exist! it's so nice to see that the characters have unique bonds with each other outside of just their relationship with the mc. ALSO? THE VISUALS?? THE AESTHETIC? i thought the visuals were very pleasing when i first loaded up this game. i really love the minimalistic vibe!
also having the time of my life flirting with all the ros, oops <3 rn i'm torn between arion and kian so far, (but i also really love rylan and blane and nikolas and dang it i listed them all-) i've only done one playthrough so far so my favourites may change as i play the other routes, but i know i'm still going to be torn between which one i like the most T_T also they're all so hot- during the pre-club scene where their outfits were being described, i was like "fuck i'm so gay"
also not only do i want to date them all. but i also lowkey want to set some of them up with each other?? like idk all i'mma say is that i was sensing some vibes and tension from some of them basically send help i have started to ship my love interests together this did not go according to plan haha at this rate i might just stay single and watch the drama unfold but also their friendships are so sweet i adore this weird dysfunctional found family dynamic so much <3
anyways i will definitely go through the other routes later when i have time, i just wanted to post this long ass comment here, whoops! very excited for the next chapter though <3
I am so torn between Arion and Blane! I found this game yesterday and played it almost all day, finished chapter 7 this morning! Ahh it kills me that I have to wait for each chapter now.
Do you know how many chapters this game will have?
omg wow, this means so much thank you!! i always love when people are torn between ros haha it makes me feel like i did something right. as for the number of chapters, it's shaping out to be slightly less than twenty <3
why must you hit me w a cliffhanger right when THAT happens? 😭 but in all honestly i REALLY like the story so far! the author didn't use excessive hard-to-read or hard to understand words and it was written very nicely! i cant wait for (potentially) late summer!! :D
this game is really cool I loved the story and the characters, I finished it in like 1 or 2 days, it's the first time I play a game of the genre and it's really interesting I'm going to start playing more! :)
Man I've been searching for a new good read for a few months now, this is truly amazing! I have played quite a few IF's but this one almost became a 1st place favourite after just a few chapters hahah, can't wait to read more :)
That was amazing, I can't wait for more! Feels like finishing a book from a captivating series and the book ends on another cliffhanger. I am very close to organizing a wall with sticky notes to theorize about the story <3 I really like how the characters are built and how there is a variety of reactions - that is the first IF where I could find the exact answers that I would use in such situations :) The only problem I encountered was being torn between two romantic interests lol (Devereux and, suprisingly for me, de Vries)
literally same :(( but in the end i picked de vries bc of his thoughts ab MC in front of crimson rouge and when he was talking to the pink(?)-haired bartender!! ill probably replay again when the story ends just to see both (if not all 😏) paths
i couldn't stop reading, this was one of the best that i've read. i have a lot of IF games saved and ive read a lot of IF games but when i tell you that this one goes into my top 5 i mean it. i loved all of the ros and istg it was so hard to choose, i ended up struggling between arion and rylan and decided that i have to go with rylan for now (i will be trying all of them tho). the story is so good, like i was seriously invested, and i just want to say that that cliffhanger was criminal aaaaaaaa but seriously thank you for this because i loved every second of it and i love how many options they were when it came to everything, it's really rare to find games that execute that without flaw
as of right now, I’ve been playing this game a lot because lately it’s one of the only ways I feel visible. I really enjoy the customization of the character because it makes me feel like the ro is talking to me and not someone who has the same name. It makes me feel seen. Props to the creator for making such an interesting story while still allowing relationships to be created. Thank you.
i love this game so much but I have just one problem with the end of chapter 7, if you stayed in the VIP lounge the whole time, when you are about to leave the club theres a choice that you can make, the person running with the knife can either stab your partner(?) (or is it your ro?) or stab you, and I think if you prevent your partner(/ro?) from being stabbed it should like add to your friendship percentage thingy. because personally, if you literally get stabbed trying to like save me, we’re better friends after that. also im so excited for chapter 8, I’ve replayed sections to see which choices do what, and its like my favorite game. thank you for making this amazing game
i'm thinking of adding the increase for that in chapter eight. moreso because i think the ro is so surprised at that point nothing is registering, but when they have some down time to think, they'll appreciate it. of course, some ros will be happier about it than others so...
if you think this doesn't make sense though i'll happily add it to chapter seven.
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will you give us the password or are we supposed to find out on our own?
wait nvm i get it now
What did you get? I didn't!
ohh no i meant as in i understood why there was the password thing i still dont know what it is
the password is gone now!
Oh I thought that I didn't get something and I see 4 more people(that upvoted 😛) thought you got the secret to the password protection 😁 but its up yay!
Shouldn't chapter 8 be out today? Ive been waiting soooo looooong for it 🖤 but it's still password protected
it will be available at 12 pm est, which is not for about 4 more hours
Oh! Got it, Thank you!)
I am holding a wedding between me and N, everybody has invitations <3
W game. Usually I offer constructive criticism, usually about pacing. However there really aren't any issues with the game. None that stand out to me at least.
i loved this!!! your character and world building is so nice!! Also Arion and Blane <3
can’t wait for eight! I played this sooooo many times! I’m enough it,neveeeer endingggg!
This was a fun read! Excited for Chapter 8. :)
super excited to share it with you <3
Hello! I really enjoy your game! I really happy that R is from SE descent (more specifically from the Philippines). We are rarely represented in media so it's nice to see more representation. I definitely fell in love with Blaine and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
i'm always happy to provide rep for minorities (in this case, filipinos). it warms my heart when i see myself represented and i love creating that feeling for others. tysm for playing <3333
I had a blast playing this.
ahh i'm so glad to hear that. tysm !!
This is probably one of my favorite interactive fics yet
Also Blane>>>
Blane Supremacy XD
tysm!! i'm so happy you liked it <3
cliff hangers get me so excited omg i’m gonna be waiting for the next update i’m so excited
Rylan unironically made me realise a few things about my sexuality LMAO i love them so much, absolutely obsessed with the story! cant wait <333
not me actually shipping the other ROs together coughcoughthat's actually crazy that rylan helped you out in some ways. i hope it was useful to you!! an absolute honour.
tysm for playing <3
no cause Blane and A, and K and Rylan have so much tension for what??/posfr!!! if i wasnt romancing Rylan id ship them w/K so bad... i have Blane and A tho 👀
blane and A actually have no right to have THIS MUCH tension /posI think this is the first twine I played in a while where I just absolutely love everybody, that I already created saves for each person. Can't wait for more!!!
tysm!! so happy you enjoyed <3
Arion and Rylan are precious omg T^T it's gonna be a hard wait finding out what happens after the club
eek hopefully not too hard! it's coming, i promise <3
nolan my love <3333333
oopsies i totally forgot i already left a comment
WAILING im obsessed
i gotta go back and do more routes at some point but also im holding blane in my teeth
This is great, I can't wait for chapter 8 I mean, what happens after I collapse on the ground after being shanked in the abdomen? /srs
hahaha you'll find out <3
This beautiful creation has my brain and heart, along with Kian and Rylan.
tysm for playing and loving my characters as much as i do <33
this game is so cool <33 i can't wait for the rest to come out!!
so glad you like it, tysm!!!
arion has my whole heart
THIS. THIS GAME RIGHT HERE.
AAAAAA i love interactive fiction so much and stuff like this always has me grooving in my seat. i love the banter between the characters and the different dynamics that exist! it's so nice to see that the characters have unique bonds with each other outside of just their relationship with the mc. ALSO? THE VISUALS?? THE AESTHETIC? i thought the visuals were very pleasing when i first loaded up this game. i really love the minimalistic vibe!
also having the time of my life flirting with all the ros, oops <3 rn i'm torn between arion and kian so far, (but i also really love rylan and blane and nikolas and dang it i listed them all-) i've only done one playthrough so far so my favourites may change as i play the other routes, but i know i'm still going to be torn between which one i like the most T_T also they're all so hot- during the pre-club scene where their outfits were being described, i was like "fuck i'm so gay"
also not only do i want to date them all. but i also lowkey want to set some of them up with each other?? like idk all i'mma say is that i was sensing some vibes and tension from some of them
basicallysend help i have started to ship my love interests together this did not go according to plan haha at this rate i might just stay single and watch the drama unfoldbut also their friendships are so sweet i adore this weird dysfunctional found family dynamic so much <3anyways i will definitely go through the other routes later when i have time, i just wanted to post this long ass comment here, whoops! very excited for the next chapter though <3
mwah. this comment has made my day tysm <3333
you are a master. i am so caught up between arion, blane, and rylan i dont know HOW IM GOING TO CHOOSE
play them all!! choose them all <333
I am so torn between Arion and Blane! I found this game yesterday and played it almost all day, finished chapter 7 this morning! Ahh it kills me that I have to wait for each chapter now.
Do you know how many chapters this game will have?
omg wow, this means so much thank you!! i always love when people are torn between ros haha it makes me feel like i did something right. as for the number of chapters, it's shaping out to be slightly less than twenty <3
i'm so ready for the next part! the cliffhanger is killing me lo
haha the next part is shaping up to be very interesting...
im so ready for it :)
👀 can't wait to read more (the cliffhanger aaaaaaa!!!!), really loving this so far!
thank you!! so happy you like it <3
...i am ngl. This is fricking amazing. I am shocked that i didnt find this earlier. Like wow.
wow what a compliment, tysm. it means a lot <3
The cliffhanger..... my heart cant waitttttt for the next update! it's so lovely ;)
One of the other things that I'm so glad about is that it's mobile-friendly...I can't express my happiness about it!!
i'm so happy you loved it! tysm <3
NOOO not the cliffhanger whyy dang it ... Ahhhhh this story is the best book I have ever read in my entire life I can't wait for the next chapter
ahhhh tysm for reading this means so much <33
why must you hit me w a cliffhanger right when THAT happens? 😭 but in all honestly i REALLY like the story so far! the author didn't use excessive hard-to-read or hard to understand words and it was written very nicely! i cant wait for (potentially) late summer!! :D
so glad that you enjoyed!! tysm for reading and supporting <3
this game is really cool I loved the story and the characters, I finished it in like 1 or 2 days, it's the first time I play a game of the genre and it's really interesting I'm going to start playing more! :)
so glad that this game introduced you to interactive fiction! it's such a lovely genre, thank you for playing <3
Why do I always like more the cold and harsh one like K?? Oh, by the way, I'm really loving this game so far. ^.^
Man I've been searching for a new good read for a few months now, this is truly amazing! I have played quite a few IF's but this one almost became a 1st place favourite after just a few chapters hahah, can't wait to read more :)
so so honoured that it's first place for you. i'm so glad you enjoyed <3
That was amazing, I can't wait for more! Feels like finishing a book from a captivating series and the book ends on another cliffhanger. I am very close to organizing a wall with sticky notes to theorize about the story <3 I really like how the characters are built and how there is a variety of reactions - that is the first IF where I could find the exact answers that I would use in such situations :) The only problem I encountered was being torn between two romantic interests lol (Devereux and, suprisingly for me, de Vries)
this means so much to me, thank you. i'm so so happy you're enjoying it this much <3
literally same :(( but in the end i picked de vries bc of his thoughts ab MC in front of crimson rouge and when he was talking to the pink(?)-haired bartender!! ill probably replay again when the story ends just to see both (if not all 😏) paths
Ayo I'm fucking invested!! How did you know I have a weakness for being called partner lol
hahaahah. glad you're enjoying the story <3
thank you for the catch! it'll be fixed in an upcoming bug update <3
i couldn't stop reading, this was one of the best that i've read. i have a lot of IF games saved and ive read a lot of IF games but when i tell you that this one goes into my top 5 i mean it. i loved all of the ros and istg it was so hard to choose, i ended up struggling between arion and rylan and decided that i have to go with rylan for now (i will be trying all of them tho). the story is so good, like i was seriously invested, and i just want to say that that cliffhanger was criminal aaaaaaaa but seriously thank you for this because i loved every second of it and i love how many options they were when it came to everything, it's really rare to find games that execute that without flaw
gosh, thank you so much. it makes me so happy that you feel this way, i'm so glad you enjoy it <3
as of right now, I’ve been playing this game a lot because lately it’s one of the only ways I feel visible. I really enjoy the customization of the character because it makes me feel like the ro is talking to me and not someone who has the same name. It makes me feel seen. Props to the creator for making such an interesting story while still allowing relationships to be created. Thank you.
had to put my phone down halfway through reading this because it touched me so much. thank you, this means the world <3
i love this game so much but I have just one problem with the end of chapter 7, if you stayed in the VIP lounge the whole time, when you are about to leave the club theres a choice that you can make, the person running with the knife can either stab your partner(?) (or is it your ro?) or stab you, and I think if you prevent your partner(/ro?) from being stabbed it should like add to your friendship percentage thingy. because personally, if you literally get stabbed trying to like save me, we’re better friends after that. also im so excited for chapter 8, I’ve replayed sections to see which choices do what, and its like my favorite game. thank you for making this amazing game
i'm thinking of adding the increase for that in chapter eight. moreso because i think the ro is so surprised at that point nothing is registering, but when they have some down time to think, they'll appreciate it. of course, some ros will be happier about it than others so...
if you think this doesn't make sense though i'll happily add it to chapter seven.
no I think it makes a lot of sense cause they would be in a lot of shock at the sight of their friend/partner being stabbed