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spelled color with a u. unplayable


(jk, love this so so much)

Blane's route has bug: when I select any answers that changes  relationship points (negative and positive) and go into the relationships tab second time points keep going up/down.

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In ch11 there is a option called "K & R route", is this a poly route or sth

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No, it's just a branch that features both of them

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Thanks!

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im sorry - this is the most enrapturing storyline ever. im not kidding,, your writing is like - SO GOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!! if you ever published a book series this would be on the same level as like maze runner or the hunger games type shi like omg omg 

also blane has my heart im a sucker for rivals to lovers

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replaying this and trying out different routes because it's just that lovely 💗

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im really happy in the direction this is going

i started this about 4-ish days ago and around the time i started chapter 10 i had begun thinking about my mcs job. it reminded me of the deportation and ICE problem happening in LA, and if i tried justifying my mc by saying "its just their job" it made me think of nazi germany,, so i figured if i were them i wouldnt have that job, esp now
and then i get to chapter 11 and 12 and it lowkey addressed exactly what i was thinking and i was so happy about that. i feel like this could be a rlly good critique on those with privilage, depending on how u go about it

ASIDE FROM THAT I JUST LOVELOVELOVEEE ALL THE CHARACTERS and how our mc really feels like us. i also like how the focus is on the story but the CHOICE of romance is there, it feels like we rlly know our priorities. i wish there was a more neutral option about dating since im aromantic, but even then the dating options could still be seen as friendly and its not forced on us very often.

OVERALL I LIKE HOW ITS GOING SO FAR, I ALSO FOUND OUT AFTER REACHING THE END OF CHAPTER12 THAT THE GAME KEEPS TRACK OF US (like how stoic i am or weather im good at traps) AND I JUST THOUGHT IT WAS SOOO COOL. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE !!!

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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

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this is so fire oml

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WAIR WHY CANT I PICK ARIONS ROUTE????

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Just a random reader but I'm not sure if there is an option like? If you are talking about ch11 there's Blane (if you took the knife for them) or K and Rylan and it's not really based on who you are romancing i guess, but you still have some time with A and N later on in the training, and in ch12 you can choose anyone to either walk by you or sit next to you, I may be wrong tho 

you're correct! it was stated that A/N's branch is just a continuation of either Blane/ K and Rylan's branches 

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even if i were given like 19billion dollars i wouldnt stop glazing this story ITS SO GOOD IT MAKES ME WANNA DO FLIPS. IDK GUYS IDK. ITS SO GOOD. THIS IS LIKE JUST WHAT I NEEDED DURING STRESSFUL FINALS AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE

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Haha thank you! Good luck with your finals <3

WUAAHA THANK YOU!!! ^^

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I have 11 romance points with N, but their name doesn't appear as an option on chapter 11 when someone texts you on the phone after the interrogation. It's even possible or the choice to enter their branch appears later in the game?

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This is probably just a choice between Rylan and Kian no matter your romantic choices, since I suppose you have them

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I really enjoyed this game

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WOW this is simply wonderful!! I'll be eagerly waiting for future updates!! Amazing job to everyone who's working on this!

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It's just one person writing this haha. But thank you!! Glad you liked it :)

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WOAH that's crazyy! I salute your determination and hard work, wonderful job~!

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I am honored to have read these words! All the waiting for the twelfth chapter was worth it. Thank you and your work!

I don't want to give away any plot details, but the twelfth chapter left a very deep impression on me. I think this must be because the detailed description of the environment, the beautiful scenery and the tense atmosphere created a contrast that I couldn't look away from.

As time went by, the companions became more and more familiar with each other. Whenever I read those interactions, I couldn't help smiling on my face! I'm very glad that this team, which was brought together for various reasons, has gradually become like a team of true friends.

Once again, thank you and your work! I will continue to look forward to the subsequent chapters.

(My English is very poor. This was written using a translation tool. I hope it can convey my meaning as accurately as possible.♡)

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After so much time, it is hard to return to the game, the codex should have a resume of what happened so far, besides there should have a list with other characthers' profile like Mirai and Nalani... even smaller characthers as well

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Thank you for the feedback. I definitely agree that the codex needs to be updated, I just haven't gotten around to it. But trust me, I'm aware of it.

thank you

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I created this account just to write this comment and say how much I love Blane. I hope we will see more of her in the next update.

You definitely will!

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